Xavier is a firefighter with a penchant for adrenalin. Most people remember him as a wild child or bad boy, but despite these views, he has a heart of gold. He might like to have fun, but he's always been a good person. Xavier grew up with his stepfather, Rick, and got even closer to him when his biological parents passed away. But it wasn't just Rick that he was close to.
He's always had a particular fondness for Holly. She moved away after school, and they lost touch, so he was excited to hear that she was returning home after all this time. He knew that it would be good to see her again, but he didn't realize just how good it was going to be. Is it wrong to feel this way about her? And does she feel it too?
I really struggled with this one. The male characters and their dialogue was totally unbelievable, and not written as a man would speak. If you’re going to write from a male’s perspective, please get a guy to read it over to make sure it reads that way, rather than a guy character that reads like a woman trying to sound like a guy.