Embracing Fate
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3.5 • 22 Ratings
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- $6.99
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- $6.99
Publisher Description
When danger prowls, his instincts ignite. But it's her love that could truly set him free.
Officer Cord Triggert never expected to find a mate—not with his complicated lineage as both panther and bear shifter. But when Piper Capshaw's home is broken into and she receives a chilling threat, Cord's protective instincts roar to life. The long-legged, fiery-haired nurse isn't just in danger—she's his.
Piper didn't expect the sexy, emotionally guarded shifter to show up on her doorstep, but one look at Officer Triggert and she's already planning how to make him hers. The attraction is instant. The chemistry? Off the charts. But while the heat between them burns hot, Cord remains cool and distant, haunted by a past he refuses to share.
Piper is determined to break through his walls, but Cord has just as much resolve to keep her at arm's length. Until one scorching night changes everything…
Now, with passion unleashed and a shocking surprise neither of them saw coming, Piper will fight to keep the man she's come to love—and the unexpected gift that could bind them forever
Customer Reviews
Poorly executed
The first 20-30% made sense - kind of -, but then everything after that was disjointed, weirdly paced and off the rails. It made no sense, there was no tension (at all, even in the beginning) and things had just kind of happened. The plot sort of just happened and the characters were just there. I found no reason to root for either of the MCs and wasn’t invested in anything that happened.
In fact I was hopping the brother would be murdered just for something interesting to happen, and to just get rid of him considering how useless he was and how hollow his character was. Overall he was an unnecessary character who could have been cut, because ultimately the ‘Brother owes gambling money to thugs’ story line was a stupid and thin.
Some of the dialogue and other grammar was also incredibly awkward and poorly written.
All in all it was a poorly written story that had an interesting premise but had fallen short in execution.