Hot Billionaire Night
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2.3 • 15 Ratings
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- $4.99
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- $4.99
Publisher Description
It was a dare. Mariah wasn't my type. She was quiet, sweet and kind. I was a player and she was a girl whose heart didn't deserve to be played. But the way she moved on the dance floor, the way she looked into my eyes and the way that she kissed me gave me no choice. Now the night is over and all I'm full of is regrets. Regrets for hooking up with a nice girl and regrets for breaking her heart.
I was just out of a long-term relationship. I didn't even know how to function on my own. I was used to being dependent on someone. Gavin was tall, handsome and successful. I knew he was a billionaire, but it wasn't his money I was after. I needed a rebound and someone to help me move on from my ex. Soon I found myself in his bed and I had no reason to say no. But now my world is changed forever. His world is changed forever. I have a secret that I need to tell him, but I was nothing to him.
Will Gavin fall for Mariah and continue a relationship, or will his player ways ruin it all? Will Mariah tell Gavin she's pregnant with his baby, or will she choose to keep it a secret?
A HEA that proves sometimes all it takes to change your life for the better is one night.
Customer Reviews
Needs editing
Really good story line but ruined by so many errors I.e. he/she, her instead of him, letters left of words making reader go back to work out context.
Hot Billionaire Night
Very amateur writing. Continuity was terrible throughout the whole book. One minute it’s one o’clock, then it’s dark outside. Her shop closes at two but he brings her father by at three and it’s still open. One paragraph happens in one location, then they’re at another, with no lead in to going there.
And the pregnancy? She’s in his car and they kissed. Next minute she’s pregnant. I went back and read it again to see if I missed something, but I don’t think I did. They both also told their friends they only kissed.
There are so many spelling mistakes and incorrect words used throughout the whole book. Not sure who edited this.