Luna Lola
The Moon Wolf
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3.3 • 25 Ratings
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- $7.99
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- $7.99
Publisher Description
"I, Grayson Dawson, Alpha of the Moonlit Pack, reject you, Lola Ashton, as my mate and Luna of this pack," I heard Grayson's voice reach my ear and a single tear ran down my left cheek as it felt like my heart was being ripped out of my chest.
"I, Lola Ashton, accept..." I did not finish my sentence before he held me up by my throat and snarled in my face. His eyes had already changed colors so I knew his wolf was in charge.
"You will not reject me, slut. I am your owner and I tell you what to do and when," he slapped me across the face and threw me on the ground.
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After being rejected by her mate in the Moonlit pack, Lola escaped on a full moon only to enter the territory of the next Alpha King who also happened to be her second chance mate.
Adrian is the next Alpha King but he hasn't been able to assume his role because he needed a Luna by his side. A rogue that trespassed on his territory, whom he ordered be killed turned out to be his mate leaving him in a dilemma.
Will Adrian reject Lola because she came into his territory as a rogue? Will he overcome what happened to him in the past and give Lola a chance or reject her and go ahead with Fay as his chosen Luna?
What will happen when everyone finds out just how much power Lola wields and how she's supposed to protect her kind in an oncoming war? Find out in Lola- The Moon Wolf!
Customer Reviews
Needs proof reading
Story is fabulous- classic abused woman meets Alpha.
However, the names change frequently during the book, leaving you to scroll back and try and work out who’s who. Kinda annoying.
I’ll buy book 2 because I’m hooked on the storyline though.
Not a great read
The errors were annoying and a distraction. The typos and grammatical errors make me think this was written by a bot and not edited. The ending left you hanging for the current storyline, and I expected that at least. A disappointment overall
Shouldn’t have to pay…
This story overall wasn’t terrible but it also didn’t follow the outline of a story, it introduced the characters and then sorted of ended after that. There was no big complication which is resolved, it just ended. I think maybe because there are “4” books in the “series” maybe you full have a complete story once you’ve read all of them which is ridiculous!
Also unfortunately the grammar is so terrible, many misspelt words and sentences that just don’t make sense at all as well as naming the wrong characters in certain scenes.
For these points above I honestly don’t think they should charge for this book, being only $7.99 I would have happily paid if it was a complete story, or if it at least was grammatically correct. But if I want to “finish” this book I am going to have to pay roughly $32 which for content which as been very inadequate so far