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Publisher Description

Epi Martin was an intelligent young girl on the cusp of becoming a mature woman. She enjoyed the nearly unquestioning trust of her mother and the devoted attention of Alfredo, the young man whom she loved and who in turn was entirely taken with her special charms. The future seemed safe and quite certain, until one day of irrevocable change. A short story. (May be unsuitable for some readers.)

GENRE
Fiction & Literature
RELEASED
2013
30 January
LANGUAGE
EN
English
LENGTH
17
Pages
PUBLISHER
Bernard Fancher
SELLER
Draft2Digital, LLC
SIZE
45.2
KB

Customer Reviews

fabteach97 ,

Went nowhere

66 pages with not enough character, events or intrigue developed for the end to be a big enough shock or 'bang'. Short story is fine but it needs loads condensed fine story to pull it off. This one didn't begin before it ended.

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