Trigger
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3.9 • 15 Ratings
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Publisher Description
*~* STANDALONE NOVEL *~*
A killer . . . that’s what I am.
It’s what I do.
It’s what I live for.
I’m no longer the Preston Hale everyone knew. I left that life and the people in it a long time ago the second I made my first kill. I wasn’t going to give in, but when I heard the screams there was no going back.
It triggered the pain, the need.
I knew what I had to do, and I did it well. But I never expected for Emma Turner – the only link to my past – to come back into my life.
She triggers a different emotion inside me, something I hadn’t ever felt.
It’s not a want to kill . . . but a need to CLAIM.
Customer Reviews
Trigger
Great read
In need of improvement (confusing story structure)
This was a bit of a mess. The later plot with finding His family’s killer made sense but the entire lead up to halfway where that plot started made NO sense.
Also the fake kidnapping, what was that!? Pointless and confusing.
Also the normal natural breaks (the paragraph spaces) you normally see to denote time has passed from scene to scene were 200% absent and just confused the timeline. At one point you go from storming away from a parking lot near the crime scene to waking up in a cold sweat. It was disorientating and annoying.
And the “Main Plot” (THAT ONLY COMES IN PROPERLY AT HALFWAY) made more sense than all the “secret government assassin” stuff. That made 2000% no sense other than to explain how and why he was obsessed with killing people (and this was the good protagonist guy, not the psycho who murdered his sister and mother).
Overall the Murder Plot made 4000% more sense and should have been the absolute focus of the book to begin with coupled with the reunion of Emma & Preston. The assassin skills should have been explained in a different way and his reason for leaving should have been the murder it would have tied in far better and been less confusing.