Falling for the Hometown Girl
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4.1 • 277 Ratings
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- $4.99
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- $4.99
Publisher Description
Katie Marshall is known for her 'girl next door' reputation and for always playing it safe. So, when she books a bachelor party from Seattle at the Marshall Ranch, she isn't sure what to expect until trouble strolls in–Hunter Richardson, local rebel turned successful software tycoon...and Katie's job gets a lot more interesting.
Hunter has always struggled to find his place in Marietta. Now, somewhat reluctantly, he's back in his hometown and not looking forward to a week on a cattle ranch... but that all changes when he sees Katie, the girl he could never forget from high school. A girl he shouldn't want anything to do with. Soon, he realizes he wants much more from her than just a guided tour of the Montana landscape.
Hunter’s plan had been to get through the week, before returning to Seattle and his million dollar gaming company. Instead, he finds himself falling for the hometown girl...
Customer Reviews
Falling for the Hometown Girl
Excellent! I loved the story. Well done.
Catherine M.
So much potential, so much disappointment
This could have been a great book. The storyline was good, if a bit unoriginal. My issues were with editing and character development. With the editing, whole words were missing, or used in the wrong places, or used incorrectly. Basic spelling mistakes everywhere. Transposing names so you ended up confused as to who was involved in the scene or conversation. And the ending was atrocious. (Spoiler alert) the H&H had a fight, the hero left to go back to his home in another state and then all of a sudden he is back. Then literally in one sentence there is anger and fighting and the next sentence they are engaged. No joke. Completely out of nowhere. The reconciliation of the issue came after the engagement. And then it was the end. I wish the author would have had some experienced beta readers at the least, not to mention a competent editor. Shame she didn't because she had potential for a solid, fun story here but it really just fell flat. Disappointing.
I want my money back
I agree with the other review that the story was ok but the book itself was boring and really elementary.