Morgan's Destiny
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3.6 • 17 Ratings
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Publisher Description
At eight-years-old Morgan Bailey suffers the loss of her parents and twin brother, in a tragic car accident. Being her only remaining family member-her Aunt Addie takes her in. Now eleven-years-later, Morgan starts to learn secrets about her family, herself, and what her destiny really is. She meets a mysterious man and soon finds herself falling in love, for the first time, but things start to become complicated, when she is forced to turn herself over to her very enemy. Will she be strong enough to find her way back to the man she loves, or will she find comfort in the enemy's arms?
Customer Reviews
Proofing needed
This book was very hard to read. It needs a proofread by a human, not just spellcheck. So many words must have autocorrected in a completely incorrect manner. Almost every paragraph had a mistake to decipher. 'Hot to trout' and 'animals roomed about the field' are just two that spring to mind. Also punctuation was very erratic.
It also needs a severe edit. There are too many redundant sentences and descriptions. The author also has a hard time deciding if she's writing formally or casually, which an editor could help her smooth out.
I think there's potential for this to be a good book, but it's very difficult to understand why this book is available when it's obviously such a rough draft.
A slightly cynical critique
This book, though containing a mediocre storyline which provides some semblance of enjoyment to the reader, is filled with countless grammarical errors, spelling mistakes, and characters with names such as "Phil" the most powerful dark wizard, or Kevin, for the most power white wizard. (uninventive in my opinion)
The story line is also religiously biased, the entire plot based on cristianity. It leaves little room for readers believing in other religions.
These facts, coupled with the almost pornagraphic storyline, lead me to conclude my opinion: I didn't find this novel appealing.