Luna Lola
The Moon Wolf
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3,0 • 2 Bewertungen
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- 4,99 €
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- 4,99 €
Beschreibung des Verlags
"I, Grayson Dawson, Alpha of the Moonlit Pack, reject you, Lola Ashton, as my mate and Luna of this pack," I heard Grayson's voice reach my ear and a single tear ran down my left cheek as it felt like my heart was being ripped out of my chest.
"I, Lola Ashton, accept..." I did not finish my sentence before he held me up by my throat and snarled in my face. His eyes had already changed colors so I knew his wolf was in charge.
"You will not reject me, slut. I am your owner and I tell you what to do and when," he slapped me across the face and threw me on the ground.
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After being rejected by her mate in the Moonlit pack, Lola escaped on a full moon only to enter the territory of the next Alpha King who also happened to be her second chance mate.
Adrian is the next Alpha King but he hasn't been able to assume his role because he needed a Luna by his side. A rogue that trespassed on his territory, whom he ordered be killed turned out to be his mate leaving him in a dilemma.
Will Adrian reject Lola because she came into his territory as a rogue? Will he overcome what happened to him in the past and give Lola a chance or reject her and go ahead with Fay as his chosen Luna?
What will happen when everyone finds out just how much power Lola wields and how she's supposed to protect her kind in an oncoming war? Find out in Lola- The Moon Wolf!
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Like the story, dislike the non perfection
I realy enjoy the story! Its funny, healing and lovable. I have not finished it yet, but I will.
I habe only one negativ point about the structure.
- the names get switched up a lot. This is very confusing.
The story
- it does go a bit fast. A new Wolf in a new pack gets accepted the first day without explaining about its past? I dont know man.
- its always the same. They always try to comfort the protagonist. Thats very unrealistic I think. It needs time to know someone and to guess what the other person will do next. They get that in one week? Nah. I would habe loved to see a bit more drama about it. It doesn't even have to be traumatizing, just an Alpha who is curios about a NEW pack member.
Other than that and some repetitions in phrases, I do like it.