All Things Return
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3.4 • 8 Ratings
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Publisher Description
All Things Return is the story of two young men caught up in the mayhem created by an international criminal cartel willing to destroy an innocent man's life for selfish gain. Howard Douglas vows to seek revenge against a member of the cartel as he goes searching for a son he never before knew existed. Terrance Butler, a young man living in Kansas while working as a newspaper reporter, has no idea that a two decades old criminal vendetta is heading his way. Learning that he has become the target of the cartel, Terrance plans his escape. Yet things are not as they seem. Terrance discovers that finding out the truth about his past requires him to face his fears, trusting that the unknown past he has sought for so long will show him the way.
Customer Reviews
Would benefit from the author returning to edit
Shows great promise with an interesting change in plot. Shame so many problems are solved by characters with an amazing gift for generating money. However, the biggest failing is the lack of editing. As well as sharpening the read by cutting many of the unnecessarily elaborate descriptions, straight forward language is often more interesting than use of big words for the sake of it. I'm sure people get out of cars more often than they exit them. And to repeat this several times in the space of a few paragraphs detracts from the story.
An average read
A complicated plot yet sadly predictable and without intrigue. Weakly researched almost to the point of naivety.