Beyond The Luna
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3.8 • 82 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Luis dreams of becoming an astronaut. Unfortunately, his mean spirited parents don't think the same way. But everything changes when he is lured by a strange moonlight, whisking him to the parallel world, Adastra. However a hideous curse has befell the land, the stars no longer twinkle and the moon is broken. After a young girl saves his life, she explains a dark evil awaits them if the moon isn't restored. Tormented by a dark shadow, Luis embarks on a danger filled quest to solve the mystery, but the deeper Luis searches, the more he becomes convinced...a great destiny awaits him.
Customer Reviews
Love This Book!!
I really enjoyed reading this book. I got so addicted too it straight for 2 hours. I was so gutted when the book finished. I would highly recommend this book. Thank-you for such an imaginative, creative and addictive book.
Such a shame
You know what, this book as a brilliantly creative storyline. I love the idea of a mystical land with its talking fish, paradise style lands and the whole lunar mystical power good triumphing over evil. But the book is so poorly written. Its horribly rushed, lacking detail and littered with grammatical issues. Similes, metaphors, adjectives...anything would pad the book out and involve the reader better. Just using basic literary effects would make this book much better.
With a story line this good, you cannot do it justice in 160 pages.
Oh and it's "wrung out his cape" not "wringed out his cape".
Captivating
Really enjoying read, couldn't put it down!