Ian

Working in publishing, all those little spelling mistakes that littered this short story, spoiled it for me! The story itself was an enjoyable read otherwise. And, I appreciate it is free, but pride would surely make the author check the editing! Stared and Staring seem to be problem words. "There" does not equal "their" either. Pedantry aside I'll be checking out more work from the author :)

This Is the first book I've started to read on iBooks and it seems a nice little feature. Only about 10 pages in but felt I had to mention the numerous grammatical and spelling mistakes already. Is this the original manuscript or has someone done a poor job of retyping these? Either way, I'm pleased I didn't pay for this as there is no excuse for this many errors in a professional piece of literature. I now step down from my soap box and will carry on reading.

This iBook, although short, had a good storyline and I liked the imagery used, although I felt the locations, such as the university, and the town it's set in could be better described, as I'm not American and so don't even know where this town was.
I would give this short story four stars if it wasn't for the numerous spelling and grammatical mistakes. Although the imagery was good, I can't overlook the fact that it was very badly written, in terms of the general language uses.
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