John: The Senior Killer
Brad Pratt and the Batt Team, no. 1
Publisher Description
My novel is a thriller of 74,000 words. It’s based on a highly intelligent serial killer bent upon cutting down the population of senior citizens from an abused childhood. In addition his profession as a makeup artist of long term standing in the film industry allows him the empirical knowledge of disguise and role acting. He taunts the investigators leaving clues and when the FBI is baffled, a small agency run by a mysterious man who receives his orders from the President of the United States is summoned.
The Brad Pratt Team is called to action to stop this killer. His team is made up of unique individuals whose personalities we can relate to. Maybe the story is not so unique, but the characters are. The Team uses high technology, determination, logical reasoning and psychological tactics to hunt down a killer whose has the whole nation of seniors in a panic. A confrontation with the FBI and with a unique ending will keep you turning the pages.
Customer Reviews
The Senior Killer
What an excellent read one that when you pick up you can't put down.Good use of characters all very interesting.Really good plot.
The only criticism i had and the reason why i haven't given it 5**** is there were a hell of a lot of spelling mistakes and wrong words not in the right context BUT this doesn't make it unreadable This is a Must for any crime book lovers xx
Entertaining but for all the wrong reasons!
I must admit initially I only continued reading this book because I make it a point to finish everything I start. The plot was quite a good one in theory but the team made such leaps of logic it was totally unbelievable. The typo's and grammar were so dire they caused great such hilarity that I woke my husband up giggling. As a thriller it was a miss but as a comedy it was a real hit.
Almost unreadable!
Terrible and disjointed to the point of maddening, I've given up halfway through.