The Cowboy's Wish
This is a light-hearted look at a cowboy who wishes for a wife...and suddenly gets one.
This story was a bit of anti climax it started off really well then nothing happened :-(
There needs to more
Put simply, to short. It just gets going and then, it ends.
Needs an ending
I understand that it's meant to be a short story but there is nothing to it. It is good as a beginning to a story and sets up quite a good storyline but it needs to have an ending.
It doesn't survive as a short story, it lacks a storyline.