The Tycoon's Secret Child
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3.5 • 33 Ratings
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- £2.99
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- £2.99
Publisher Description
Leonardo Vitale’s life changes with one middle of the night phone call. The sinfully handsome hotel tycoon never expected to hear the name Rose Steele again.
Three years ago, Leonardo told Rose he never wanted marriage or children. The sexy grad student walked away from their sizzling passion filled Neapolitan nights, taking her secret back to Texas with her.
Now, an injured Rose wakes to find the man she once loved sitting by her hospital bed. Leonardo vows to help her recuperate at his home in Sicily so he can bond with his daughter. Can Rose be near him and ignore the memories of their heated nights?
Customer Reviews
Poorly written
The story line has the potential of being good, but the entire book is so poorly written and extremely rushed, it’s not enjoyable at all.
Perspectives shift without reason - one second the story is in first person, the next it’s in third person.
There are opportunities for the relationships and emotions between the characters to the explored but the writer misses these and instead just rushes them. For example, a bit thing was made of R’s hospital for her arm and asking L to attend. It skips the appointment goes straight to “it’s fine” - the writer could have delved into both characters emotions here and explored more than just a few badly written dialogues/ interactions and a rushed ending.