Lawgivers: Gabriel

Badly writren

I've read a bunch of this authors books and she usually has a good story but her storytelling is sometimes at times a bit shaky. This book was though very badly written as a hole. It started off good with a good story and well written, but about half way into the book it was as if the author got bored with her own book with both story and grammar showing a worse side. The ending was just bad. The story isn't even concluded as she takes the main character out of her own story and then jumps several months for a type of prolog where you don't find out what happened to everyone else and hardly either the main character. There was a lot of points where the story jumped suddenly and it takes a couple of pages to get into it again. Also the price was steep for the length of story and quality.