Heartless (Unabridged)
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Publisher Description
Working as a nanny for the world’s grumpiest single dad should have been simple. Except I can’t keep my eyes off him. And he can’t keep his hands off of me.
Cade Eaton is 13 years older than I am and barely looks my way. Until I get him into the hot tub one night for a game of truth or dare. Then all bets are off—and so are our clothes. He’s gruff, a little rough around the edges. But broad-shouldered ranchers with calloused hands and filthy mouths are this city girl’s kryptonite. So who am I to resist?
But it’s in our quiet moments together that he softens. It’s when he takes care of me that I realize his hardened exterior is just a façade. It’s when I watch him go all sweet with his little boy that I really fall for him.
Someone convinced him once that his best wasn’t good enough. But I’ve never felt more cherished than I do in his arms.
My contract may say this arrangement is only for two months.
But my heart says this is forever.
Customer Reviews
Daddy kink/age gap that missed all the marks
Writing felt cheesy and predictable.
The spicy bits weren’t very spicy and a tad awkward. The first time they finally do something about the tension that was building it was super aggressive and playing up the age gap/daddy kink. I’m not opposed to it but in combination with the writing it just felt so out of the blue and confusing.
2/10 for potential, but felt like it needed a lot more editing, revising, and story/character development.