Partners – ‘Mastering the Virgin’ Part Two: A BDSM Ménage Erotic Romance

Too much narration

The idea of “Show, don’t tell” isn’t followed and its a boring story. It’s mainly a monologue by the boring main character. He sounds like a detective sorting through evidence or analyzing a crime scene. I’d have preferred that it be told from the woman’s point of view rather than a man that has very little emotion or reaction to anything.