In our English lessons we've been studying non-chronological reports. Once we'd looked at some reports and learned about their features, it was time to have a go at writing some reports of our own. We decided to create our own Pokemon creatures and write non-chronological reports about them. Here, there are reports about 28 Pokemon, all written by Year Five pupils.
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This is ok.
I know this will sound very rude but maybe work on your drawing skills a little bit? Benji the rabbit doesn’t look like a Pokemon, maybe add some more unique and creative parts or patterns to the body. Blaze’s tail looks like charmanders tail. It’s ok to get inspired but maybe it would be best to find a forgotten or not popular Pokémon to get inspiration off, just so haters don’t completely go off at you. I’ve only gotten the sample so I don’t really have any criticism other than some off the spelling mistakes, but other than that if you work really hard and follow some of this ( and maybe look up a video ) then I bet you can make this book better.
No offense but they rly can’t draw dat good I wanna see good Pokémon not ugly Pokémon
The only good one was the tiger Pokémon
YOU COPIED CHARIZARD