5LM/DA Pokedex
Our Reports
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3.2 • 59 Ratings
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Publisher Description
In our English lessons we've been studying non-chronological reports. Once we'd looked at some reports and learned about their features, it was time to have a go at writing some reports of our own. We decided to create our own Pokemon creatures and write non-chronological reports about them. Here, there are reports about 28 Pokemon, all written by Year Five pupils.
Customer Reviews
Easy to find QR codes plus permission
I loved the story, but the part about getting the Pokémon in Pokémon GO, were you allowed to just instantly put in new Pokémon? If yes, I’m trying to get to those online QR codes. Please try to make it easier to get those Pokémon.
Bad
Bad spelling, lots of repeating, and some of the types don’t exist and stuff doesn’t make sense. PS: flamethrower is a copy of Charizard.
This is ok.
I know this will sound very rude but maybe work on your drawing skills a little bit? Benji the rabbit doesn’t look like a Pokemon, maybe add some more unique and creative parts or patterns to the body. Blaze’s tail looks like charmanders tail. It’s ok to get inspired but maybe it would be best to find a forgotten or not popular Pokémon to get inspiration off, just so haters don’t completely go off at you. I’ve only gotten the sample so I don’t really have any criticism other than some off the spelling mistakes, but other than that if you work really hard and follow some of this ( and maybe look up a video ) then I bet you can make this book better.