All About Dogs

Love the puppy on the front sorry but the drawings they could use some touch up’s like try again on the drawings.

So this book is pretty good, but you need to work on some stuff, I am a young writer too. Add more facts! Also add some stuff most new dog owners wouldn’t know. Such as recommendations for new dog owners. Like, what breed they should get and what they shouldn’t, what kind of food, what toys are good for the dog and what isn’t, etc. Also the drawings are okay, but I recommend like real pictures as better pictures attract more audience. Right now the cover just looks like a little puppy with nothing else, but you can add the title to it or get a more action packed picture. And the picture in the book needs improvement. Maybe (if you want) use a real picture (though I said this already), I recommend pinterest for the pictures, but make sure to only use the ones that you have permission or is free to use. Also like change the font, and start polishing it. Like “Dogs are a lot of fun.with these tips you can have a dog that is healthy and safe” should be “Dogs are a lot of fun! With these tips you can have a dog that is healthy and safe.” (I dont remember if you wrote healthy or happy sorry) You should add some about why some dogs were bred. Example “A husky was bred for sledding in harsh, cold weather. A german shepherd, cattle dog, border collie, was bred for herding large flocks of chickens and herds of sheep and cattle. However, some people realized german shepherds were good military dogs as they were highly intelligent. Now they work for many jobs. There are hunting dogs too! Which are basically the opposite of herd dogs!” Talking about this helps dog owners know what kind of dog they want. Thanks for reading all this, I know it is a lot, but I wanted to help out.

Edit: i just realized this was made in 2014 so the author is older than me 😭😭 (i was born a year after this book was published)

I think that this book was written by a kid. It is so good though! Very important tips about dogs! Also I saw some people saying mean stuff about this book and
1) Just cause it is not your cup of tea does not mean it is not someone else’s, you can still say what you have to say kindly!
And 2) There are real people with real feelings on the other side of your screen so be careful with your words.
Anyways that’s all good book! Loved the food tips!❤️🐕🦮