Alpha Initiation (Alpha Blood #1)

The storyline was good. The political process was brutal. I wish the focus would have been more about Luke and Becky's relationship. I found it interesting that no one was looking for Becky.

The story was interesting and characters engaging. However, nothing turns me away from a book faster that poor proof reading, spelling, and redundancy. The word "quip" was used way too much. If I as the reader can't tell it's a witty comment then it probably wasn't well written. So not a bad book.

Please proofread your work!!! So annoying! You even left in your little notes to yourself, interchanged Allistair with Alston which was really confusing, and so many other goofs it was just awful to read. Read the first bit of the sneak preview. You didn't even proofread that!