Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate
The Second Chance Mate
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- $5.99
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- $5.99
Publisher Description
"Fuck, Ada…"
"Brad... oh, fuck... deeper... harder!" Ada's shrill voice begged between breathy moans.
The banging of the headboard against the wall intensified as Ann froze.
No... it couldn't be!
She took a deep breath and nudged the door a little more. Her chest felt like it would explode as she held her breath whilst the crack widened.
When it revealed her sister lying underneath Ann's husband-to-be, her hands flew to her mouth to stifle the gasp of horror as her heart shattered instantly.
As Brad roared his release inside her sister, Ada turned her head towards the door with a smirk.
An icy chill descended over Ann as if a bucket of ice water had been thrown over her and she stood and stared, her eyes wide and mouth slightly open in disbelief.
Ada lifted her hand and waved in Ada's direction with a smug smile plastered on her face as Brad collapsed on top of her, kissing her neck tenderly.
Is there anything you can do if your mate had sex with your sister?
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This Novel is still Ongoing.
Book one comprises the first 50 chapters.
Book two will comprise chapters 51-100.
Customer Reviews
Overall Good Storyline
The context of the book and story itself I find quite interesting and wanted more of what was going to happen. This would’ve seen a 4 or 5 star being given for that alone; however taking into consideration the grammatical errors, punctuation, separation between paragraphs (or lack thereof) to signify a change in scenery or people being described, names being mixed up or misspelled (Adam is missing the A in a section and Ada and Ann’s names get confused in another), and the mistake of going from third party to first party reading are all issues which should have been looked at more carefully. Especially when the book which clearly could have been a single is being separated into 3 parts (or more since it’s continuous). Makes me question the authors motives and wonder if they’re just trying to get as much as they can or do they really think they’re worth the prices of these small release novellas. It’s also making me question whether I’ll watch for the next installment or even purchase it, because in the end, I doubt the cost will be worth it.
I wanted to like it
Decent story line but too predictable. The writing was not good. I will not be buying more books from this author.