Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate
Love After Marriage
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Publisher Description
"Fuck, Ada…"
"Brad... oh, fuck... deeper... harder!" Ada's shrill voice begged between breathy moans.
The banging of the headboard against the wall intensified as Ann froze.
No... it couldn't be!
She took a deep breath and nudged the door a little more. Her chest felt like it would explode as she held her breath whilst the crack widened.
When it revealed her sister lying underneath Ann's husband-to-be, her hands flew to her mouth to stifle the gasp of horror as her heart shattered instantly.
As Brad roared his release inside her sister, Ada turned her head towards the door with a smirk.
An icy chill descended over Ann as if a bucket of ice water had been thrown over her and she stood and stared, her eyes wide and mouth slightly open in disbelief.
Ada lifted her hand and waved in Ada's direction with a smug smile plastered on her face as Brad collapsed on top of her, kissing her neck tenderly.
Is there anything you can do if your mate had sex with your sister?
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This Novel is still Ongoing.
Book two comprises chapters 51-100.
Book three should follow by the end of January 2023 with another 50 chapters.
Customer Reviews
Love it
These cliffhangers are killing me!!! I need a final book!!!!
Disappointing
I continued the story because I did find it interesting and I wanted to know what was going to happen. Though the storyline is still interesting to me, I found even more issues than the first book; more grammatical errors, punctuation, lack in separation between paragraphs, names still being mixed up and/or misspelled, and still switching from a third party to first person viewpoint. I stand by my original statement the story should have been a single print book instead of being separated into parts. Also, there’s no reason the author should have this many errors continuously through their writing when charging people to read it; edit your work to put out something of quality with no issues for the reader to decipher. Honestly I regret spending the money on these as to me they’re not worth the price; especially when I could’ve had a professionally edited and fully put together book for the price paid so far. I’ll likely pass on the next installment, I don’t feel like the storyline is worth the cost with the lack of editing and consideration for the reader by the author.