Beast Within (Beasty Series #1)
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4.4 • 26 Ratings
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- $2.99
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- $2.99
Publisher Description
Gabriel Slade runs Hollywood with his gorgeous blue eyes and egregious temper. No one knows that underneath it all is a man with a frozen heart, cursed to become a beast at every full moon. For seven days he has no choice but to roam the earth as a vicious animal, until he meets a woman who can change it all.
Luna Grace has a hatred for everything Gabriel Slade stands for, but she doesn't even know what he looks like. When a chance encounter reveals feelings Luna never knew she harboured, it stands to reason that she would run.
Can Luna overcome her hatred and break the curse? Or will Gabriel's temper keep her from realizing her true feelings, dooming him to remain the beast forever?
Customer Reviews
Good concept but...
This story greatly needs an editor. Dialogue is confusing without written description of who is speaking. Scenes change without warning and start with that unlabeled dialogue leaving the reader confused for a bit. Back story is given in the middle of a scene or moment that doesn't quite fit very well. All these lead the reader to feel less satisfied with the story than they should. The promise of a decent story is there if it can be saved from misspells and the aforementioned factors.