Beyond the End of the World, Lokians 1
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3.9 • 58 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Intelligent races travel through wormholes to explore the farthest reaches of the galaxy. Thewls inform Humans of a looming threat. Lokians are a ravenous race of space bugs. They harvest technology from advanced civilizations and integrate with it to mass produce living ships, dangerous vanguards, and formidable legions.
Captain O'Hara of Phoenix Crew travels with Thewls to retrieve an ancient vessel from a mysterious race simply known as travelers. Can a single craft be the key to saving the galaxy? Why do Thewls believe the travelers once visited Earth? Does O'Hara and Phoenix Crew have what it takes to obliterate the space bugs?
Customer Reviews
Loco
The premise and outline of the story is good but sometimes seems fragmented or confusing. Character development seems incomplete. The end of the story leaves the impression that the end of the hive queen reverberates throughout time and space changing history past present and future.
Editor needed
Seriously, the author needs an editor. Good plot.
Not bad for the first in a series
The story line is a typical set up for the first book in a series
There many spelling errors and sometimes the syntax is hard to follow near the end of the story there is a very strong borrowing from the Independence Day movie