Bought and Paid for #1 (Servicing the Billionaire) (Billionaire Vampire Erotic Romance‪)‬

Scared secretary that gets depreciatingly banged by her loud, rude and condescending boss, who she finds out during this sex in the stairwell, is a rude, condescending vampire with severe control issues. Here, there may be some minor characterizations but little or no, oft repeated storyline.

Okay, now you’ve read the book. Don’t waste your time or money on a few more pages of… lemme guess. The demure, quiet secretary goes on to become his possession and it’s a do it or get out thing. But, she’s probably in love. Okay, 25- or so, pages later?. Cha-Ching, spend another few bucks for not very much story.

Take my advice, there are lots of great, free NOVELS out there worthy of your notice where it’s obvious that these crappy writers are only in the business because their lousy 9th grade English teacher told her she had talent. No talent, just greed in MY opinion.

I just read a snarky, lol vampire freebie of 100- or so pages by HOLLY RYAN. Check her out! And, of you like her, don’t spend money on each individual book, by the series for $10. ;).

I kept thinking as I read this that if there was some editing it would be a pretty good story but the fact the story ended when it actually got interesting was a let down. The kick in the teeth from the author is the fact the sequel, which is shorter, is 2.99! Even if it was .99 it would be too much for MAYBE 12,000 words. The author needs to edit and make these longer.