Branded Mage
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4,1 • 78 notes
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- 2,99 $US
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- 2,99 $US
Description de l’éditeur
After thousands of years without magic, Thad a young man has reawakened the lost art. The only problem is that he is being held prisoner by the queen of Farlan a country where men are second class citizens. With rebellion and war knocking on the Queendom's door, Queen Serena must try and convince Thad to aid her or else her country will fall to the militant rule of the oppressive Ablaians.
Avis d’utilisateurs
Mage
A good proof reader would make it a lot more enjoyable.
Decent, but needs editing
Due you’re thing, auteur, buy wall manes, butt lean too edit.
I highlighted a hundred spelling errors, most of them egregious.
I can’t bring myself to continue with the third book.
Not edited in the slightest
While the idea of the story is solid, there are way too many grammatical and spelling errors for reading it to be enjoyable. It is almost like a rough draft was published. Between sentence fragments (a subordinate clause is routinely its own sentence) and incorrect words (“complexly forgetting” instead of completely forgetting), the errors pull you completely out of the story. Would not recommend.