It was a normal day. Then giant robots erupted out of the ground and began destroying mankind. As told by Jack, the keeper of the Journal, this story chronicles the last days of mankind.
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What a great short story well worth the read. I highly recommend it! Especially since it is free!
Good, but too short
This was good but too short; I was hoping for more. I liked the premise, and the story was well-written. The author could have used an editor, as shown by the typos (for example, he wrote "here" when he meant "hear") and the misuse/excessive use of "had," as in "I had watched" when "I watched" would suffice. But that's just me nitpicking, an editor by trade. Other than that, I enjoyed this, and despite it being a short read, it's definitely worth the price (free). Nice work.