Confessions of a First Timer

Punctuation is a good thing

I enjoyed reading this a timeless tale of lust at first sight however there was little to no use of quaint writing conventions such as a period or even commas the story read like one long e. e. cummings poem a bit like I am writing this review but overall I liked it and besides that you can't beat the price with a stick it was free and especially when I myself have not written anything better so hats off to this budding writer.