Dirty Devil

I’d give it 5 stars but between this book and the last I’ve seen numerous grammatical mistakes.

Lots of jumbled sentences, paragraphs where the following paragraph rephrases the previous, as if someone drafted two ways of saying it, then didn’t delete one. Even an occurrence of the word “flingers” in a duplicate sentence where the previous sentence read “fingers”.

The stories are incredibly written, which is why I keep reading them, but the editing needs to catch up. Who lets stuff like that make it to publishing?

I love these books. I feel like I would hang out with these well developed characters! I have bought the series and reordered the next.

I couldn’t put it down. I spent the entire day reading it. Didn’t like how it ended though. Bummer.