Element, Part 1

Not sure if this is a young adult book, but it reads like one. The story is good but the ending is terrible. There wasn’t an ending at all. The story just stopped. Sorry, but not falling for the way the author is trying to sell her books.

This book from the beginning is not what I thought it was. It’s just a bad romance book and the only reason that this book has one star is because I can’t give zero stars. The description is not what the real book is about, and even though it’s free, you’d be better off buying a $20 dollar book then reading this.

It's evident from the first error-riddled sentence that the author hasn't any grasp on the basic rules of punctuation and sentence structure. The incorrect grammar outweighs the correct grammar. In its current state, it can't even be classified as a book.
Typically, I would stop there, the very base is too broken to support a story, but if all grammatical errors were corrected, it wouldn't do any good. The story is somehow both cliché and entirely illogical. The imagery is so bizarre that it's comical. The characters are all dull clichés that lack any sort of realism. The dialogue is by far the most jarring aspect of this train-wreck. It comes off as if it were written by space aliens attempting, and failing miserably, to emulate human culture.
If you love to read, do not download this ebook. It's not a book, it's not a story, it's just insulting. Sure, the download is free, but by the end you'll feel as if you're owed money.