Forgotten Mage
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4.2 • 52개의 평가
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- US$2.99
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- US$2.99
출판사 설명
The Broterhood's hold in Rane has been destroyed but not everything is going well. Less than ten years after the destruction of the main Brotherhood forces the mages in their tower have forgotten what their new land was created for and in his father’s absence it is up to Bren to correct the wrongs that have been levied on the magical races.
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Engaging despite lacking an editor
As with all the previous books in this series, there are still constant grammatical errors, lack of proper punctuation, completely missing words and/or incorrect usage, character names getting swapped, and the occasional continuity error, yet this series is still enjoyable to read. Thad’s internal struggles and external pressures involving the opposite gender have always been a bit exasperating to witness, but it doesn’t fully detract from the storyline overall. Seeing how much his power has grown, as well as his creativity in using it, has been a treat however. It’s also neat to not only see how similar his son Bren is to his father, but how different as well. I look forward to finding out what happens in the future of the series. In summary, don’t let the absence of editing keep you from trying this series. I simply pause to mentally correct the problematic bits and then move on.
Good story, but needs editing work.
I really like the story and characters, but I have never bought a book from iTunes with so many grammatical errors. It’s almost like no one proof read this before publishing. There are errors like leaving the w off where or Thad’s name used when it should be Bren’s or completely wrong word inserted.
Needs a good copy editor.
The storyline and writing style are okay, but extremely irritating with the numerous copy editing oversights. Incorrect word choice numerous times. Character names of Bren and his father often used incorrectly/interchangeably.