Healing Danger

I enjoyed this read and am looking forward to reading more in this series.

This storyline needs lots of work.

The book needs a proofreader to fix the grammatical and punctuation errors.

Also, the story isn’t believable. This team is supposed to be made of former special forces members, who are security experts. Lauren, the female lead, is being hunted by two people. She has one bodyguard who stays with her at her condo and takes her to the office everyday. If someone is trying to kidnap and/or kill someone, you take them to a safe house. You don’t take them to and from the condo everyday where someone can shoot them, run them down with a car or any number of other things.

Her romantic interest was also taking her out to restaurants. What security expert does that when people are after you?

The author also does a bad job fabricating drama between Lauren and her love interest.

Yes it has potential BUT....

The story doesn’t flow very well, at least in the beginning.

The parts about Claire and Lauren having special abilities should be removed. They don’t flow well with the first part of the story or if you want to keep it, rewrite the first half so it flows better with the 2nd half.

It would be beneficial to have impartial individuals review before putting this out for public consumption. I would not want to have paid for this.

A new editor, with perhaps a degree in English, would be a vast improvement. There are a lot of grammatical errors.

Yes the plot has potential. It does need to be thoroughly rewritten.

The cover is good but it doesn’t go with the plot. The individuals may have a military background but the story takes place with the security company at which the former soldiers work.