Ex Special Forces commander Dane Bennett is now the team leader at Fortis Security. Protecting people is his job...until a serial killer targets Lauren Cassidy and makes it personal.
Dane never imagined the woman who'd left him for another man, ripping away his chance at a family, would become his most dangerous client.
Racing to keep Lauren safe from a deadly killer with an agenda, Dane makes a split-second decision. A decision neither of them may survive.
Can’t wait for more
I enjoyed this read and am looking forward to reading more in this series.
Has potential but....
Yes it has potential BUT....
The story doesn’t flow very well, at least in the beginning.
The parts about Claire and Lauren having special abilities should be removed. They don’t flow well with the first part of the story or if you want to keep it, rewrite the first half so it flows better with the 2nd half.
It would be beneficial to have impartial individuals review before putting this out for public consumption. I would not want to have paid for this.
A new editor, with perhaps a degree in English, would be a vast improvement. There are a lot of grammatical errors.
Yes the plot has potential. It does need to be thoroughly rewritten.
The cover is good but it doesn’t go with the plot. The individuals may have a military background but the story takes place with the security company at which the former soldiers work.
Edge of your seat suspense. Fantastic storyline