Her Alien Trader

It really had potential, if you go by the books blurb. Then it just went downhill fast and for shorter stories…there’s little wiggle room to fix it later, cause there’s no later…books done! I get he doesn’t speak our language but I’ve read other reviews and I have to agree it just wasn’t done correctly…he didn’t have some kind of translator (he takes shipments all over the galaxy), doesn’t offer her one as well until the very end and I worked in service and it’s probably stupid to most A: cobb salads are overrated…sorry I don’t mind salad, just have a dislike for this one. B: no one who works for tips is going to leave it outside your door and don’t use our current situation to convince me this interaction is normal. Like I said it had great potential and I loved an alien romance as much as the next…others who loved it great, I’m glad she a niche but just have someone really read it and I hope she willing to listen. Don’t come for me…I know it not real and came from her mind but maybe there’s things she never done job wise before writing and needs our advice! There’s jobs I can’t do, as I’m sure there are some that can’t do mine…that’s what makes us individuals. Well if this gets accepted and you make it all the through my tangent about triggers that’ll never be in the beginning of books lol, I will not discouraged anyone from reading this or any books…if you read the blurb or my rant and want to read it. Go for it…it’s free will for a reason and I hope you prove me wrong.

The story was nice. Just as it was getting interesting it was over. I prefer to really get into a book. I am not sure if I would read more from this author unless there was more substance to the story. I like the characters though.