I Am Not Worthy. God's Manual for Self Esteem‪.‬

Good ideas portrayed and inspirational, but had many grammatical errors and misspelling

I believe that you have a heart to help people and I realize that you are offering this book free of charge; however, it is very poorly written, countless misspelled words, incomplete sentences, disorganized in thought and presentation. I doubt that anyone besides myself has completely read it. To improve this book, I would recommend that you or someone else re-read it for editing and then draft it out in outline form and then rewrite it. Also, for new Christians give references to the Bible as they may not understand what you are referring to, in most of your discussion, either that or use footnotes/endnotes for references. I could follow your point but towards the end you switched audiences and started writing in 3 person plural and even started introducing new angles. I believe that you have a unique concept and this book was published before it was ready. After reading this, I think I would be wasting my time to read anything else you may have to offer. Take time to edit your work before publishing, if you are serious about reaching people, get serious about your editing and proofreading skills. My critique may seem harsh but I am hoping that you take it to heart and grow in a positive direction. You obviously had a desire to write, otherwise you would not have started a "book" but your motivation was lost in translation. Your writing is a reflection of all Christians, whether we agree with you or not and you have placed it in a public venue, so I am asking you to please correct your spelling and Grammar, it is not a good reflection of your Christian brothers and sisters.

It seemed innocent, but the author used a cuss word (just the first letter and dots to finish it out) and then practically said that it took God thousands of years to build the Earth! Heresy!