Iron Bones
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وصف الناشر
Light and Dark Fae are both dying, caught in the grip of a plague that threatens to sweep through both courts. The deadly disease is spreading, and no one can pinpoint the origins, nor can an antidote be formulated until the details of the contagion are understood. As Cernunnos sets Ferosyn—his best healer—on the task, he also instructs the Wild Hunt to take on the investigation.
Now, Ember and Herne must race against time, seeking an answer before both Fae courts are decimated. Their search leads them deep into the mountains, to a hidden burial site where they discover a terrifying secret that could mean the extinction of the entire Fae race.
مراجعات العملاء
Good story, less so on the structure
I really do enjoy the storyline so far that has been going on with the wild hunt. My issues are obviously with the mistakes in spelling, grammar and using the wrong use of words. Certain thing like the knowing the difference between a retaining wall and restraining, but yet will give you full blown step by step directions from point a to point b. Use more research on the story, uses of words and less on traveling directions. I feel you are using these directions just to fill in a paragraph. Also the repetitive words at the bend of one sentence and the beginning of the next. That same word can cause a disruption in a smooth read. Anyway, there is quite a bit via the critique but again the story itself is good.