Letters to the World
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3.0 • 1 Rating
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- $0.99
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- $0.99
Publisher Description
A moment of clarity provides a possible solution to one of our greatest mysteries. How exactly would you go about explain it? Regardless of that answer, here is my theory... I mean my story.
Customer Reviews
Stream of consciousness
There were a lot of deep thoughts laid out in this work by Eliud. It strikes me as a stream of consciousness piece, laying the groundwork for something more. Call it a rough draft, if you will. The three star rating is to illustrate its work in progress. I see the potential, and look forward to the next revision.
Many questions were asked, for such a short piece, not allowing time for the author to expound upon them. This hurts the work slightly, as it created an erratic flow of thought. Editing is needed to proof for grammar, punctuation & spelling errors.
I would lead with the story about author's son. I think it might set the piece up better, and has a relatable and endearing quality many readers may enjoy. Overall, expanding the piece will make it easier to read and appreciate, and allow the author to provide more depth to the questions posed.