Mated To The Cold Hearted Alpha
Submit to Me
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2.0 • 4 Ratings
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- $4.99
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- $4.99
Publisher Description
He took my father's life. Fate gave him my mate. But can I give myself to the man who destroyed everything I loved?
"You want me to f**k you, I know it."
"As much as you don't like me, you are my mate and you can't deny me!"
I stood up behind her, one hand holding her hip, and leaned down, my breath ragged against her neck, my voice husky.
"I'll listen to your body... what it wants... and my body... what it needs. You won't feel the pain of correction like you did today... only the pleasure that a little bite of pain can bring."
*Enemies to Loves*
*Forbidden Love*
*Dark Romance*
*Revenge*
Warning: READ AT YOUR RISK
Book 5 of the series
Customer Reviews
Confusing
The story has the potential to be really good. I don’t understand the abrupt ending with no idea whether this is going to continue or not. And who the heck is Wayne? That even appeared throughout the story which made no sense because there was no character named Wayne and pages repeated themselves. I’m not sure. I understand what the authors going with this but like I said, it could be a great story and I’d love to finish it and I feel a little bit Disoriented from the abruptness of the ending and cutting off of the story. There’s no extension here.
Why Bother!
The editing for books 1 through 5 is horrendous. The author should have more pride in her work. The excruciating lack of attention to details made it almost impossible to read each book. The story line was confusing and this was exacerbated by the misspellings, changes in tense, duplication of paragraphs, sudden changes in character names, etc.…This last book, 5, ended abruptly, what happened? I am angry at myself for paying $4.99 for each of the 5 books.
Please, please fix this or quit publishing what you are writing.