Mike
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4,3 • Оценок: 41
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От издателя
Working with a specialized team of warriors can be nerve-wracking! But Lexie finds it even more difficult when she’s all alone in a huge, empty warehouse filled with…strange contraptions. But then the Delta Force team comes back and…good grief, the guy from the bar walks off of the helicopter looking like a triumphant king…Lexie is completely lost! And boy, is he bigger than ever! Big and strong and…just wow! Lexie has a hard time maintaining her professionalism whenever Colonel Mike McCain is around.
Mike is fascinated by the delicate brunette. He knows he should maintain a professional distance from the woman. But she was soft and sweet and adorably sexy. And she has secrets!
Since it was his job to discover secrets, Mike is justifiably intrigued. And yet, he wants the lovely Lexie to trust him enough to confide in him about her secrets.
So why won’t she trust him? What horrible secret was she hiding from him?
Отзывы покупателей
Mike
Wonderful and surprising storyline. Thank you for keeping it clean that makes it even better and enjoyable!
JK
Juvenile
This is a very basic story written at about a fourth grade reading level. It was ridiculous.
As for the characters, no one can possibly be this naive. And the military does not operate this way at all. I wish people who wrote about the military had a bit of experience with it so they weren’t misleading other civilians with nonsense.
Needs a few more drafts
Plot feels very “show” and not “tell”, a little flat. Read like an advanced draft, missing lots of scenes. Has potential though.