Murder Mayhem‪!‬

The worst book ever

There are no paragraphs, no descriptions of surroundings, haphazard phrases, and no introduction to characters at all. The first few pages involve conversations without telling who is speaking and it's more like disconnected thoughts. I'd never discourage a young writer but please learn some basic rules before your next attempt. I couldn't get past page 8. As the author says at least 4 times in those 8 pages, it was that bad. Sorry but don't waste your time