Pack Run

I enjoyed the plot but the story seemed to end abruptly. I kind of question the accent because I would think someone living in the States for most of their life would have lost their accent but I chose to suspend reality, I mean I’m reading a Paranormal Romance novel so that’s a given to begin with. Also, I felt it was all too easy for Brochan to claim his Alpha status from Malcolm & Brochan explaining to his clan who he was got skipped entirely. I feel like it was a missed opportunity to expand on the story especially when so much time was spent on Ailsa & Brochan’s journey to Scotland. However, I did like the fact that Ailsa was resourceful & intelligent. It’s a shame that parts of the story were rushed or not expounded upon, such as Ailsa’s bite, what ends up happening? That would seem to be an important part of the story. Maybe this is part of a series & it’s addressed in another book. I’ve read other novels from this author & the stories & relationships were more fleshed out than this one & I enjoyed them. This one just seemed rushed especially towards the end & that’s unfortunate because I feel it could be a great story. The potential is certainly there.

Scottish accent but raised in America by nuns and with an international drivers license??? I realize this is fiction but the inconsistencies kept drawing my attention from the dragging plot.

Please please PLLLEASE don’t keep this series going. It has such a terrible plot