Poems, a Collection of Thoughts Feelings, and Ideas

Good effort

For all the projected emotion, I didn't feel much of anything. Cliché lines, matched with a lack of imagery, made for a boring read.

You're writing from a birds eye view of your feelings. Get honest. Write about the things that scare you about yourself.

Also dont apologize for being "dark" [for being yourself] with a disclaimer about how happy you are in real life. [uber unnecessary].

I do however LOVE that you are putting yourself out there and asking for feedback. THAT is remarkably commendable, and worthy of applause. Go you! Keep writing!!!

-A. Fearon