Ride Me Reckless
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3.5 • 52 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Chloe's car dies in the middle of nowhere. Her only option is the brooding cowboy who pulls over like it's a chore. He doesn't smile. He doesn't talk. He definitely doesn't flirt.
Beck wants her gone. She's loud, city-pretty, and all wrong for a man like him. But she's also stuck on his ranch and driving him wild without trying.
They argue. They touch. They cross the line in every way that counts. What starts as an inconvenience turns into the one thing neither of them expected.
Now the question isn't how it started. It's how the hell they're supposed to stop.
Customer Reviews
Continuity issues
This desperately needs continuity editing. There are innumerable inconsistencies that undercut and ultimately ruin what is a rather lovely piece of writing. Everything from timeline glitches, to a town and character’s name changing, to a nonsensical final conflict, to a complete change in character backstory, to introducing major characters out of the blue in the last chapter. I didn’t read the last couple of pages because it all went so awry.
Editing and continuity
needs some editing help. between the 3 sections of the narrative 1 character’s name changes 3 times and another minor character has 2 different fates … also nobody on a working ranch constantly strips shirtless unless they’re swimming, showering or changing out of their clothes …
Disjointed
Very poor writing. Order of events confusing and disorganized. Needed better editing.