Sample TOEFL Essay Correction

SUDDENLY...

 You will understand how to structure your writing to create the best first impression.

 Your will be able to focus on what's REALLY important, instead of wasting your energy on things that don't matter.

 Your preparation will become much easier, because you will follow a list of simple things to work on.

 All the grammatical errors will be highlighted, fixed and explained.

 You will not blindly use erroneous expressions any longer.

 You'll know how to handle your spelling difficulties.

 You won't feel alone and frustrated; you'll know that we're there to support you and you can count on our help any time.

 With every work you submit for correction, your progress will become obvious. You will be confidently working to achieve your target score.