Shrouded Kingdom

I was so hooked on this, I finished it in one day. I recommend reading this book. :)

Aside from the main village changing its spelling,
Actions that don’t follow through and tenses that don’t make sense…
I finished reading what should have been the first draft of this “book”.
The characters were not well fleshed out and thus quite wishy-washy.
Many things were repeated multiple times, while others weren’t even addressed.
Far too much tries to happen in with far too little explanation or time.

Minor spoiler?
Still have absolutely no idea why she was actually outside the village, as the story opens.

My other more conclusive review was accidentally deleted so I’ll abridge this one.
I was mildly interested at the beginning, but it lost my attention when the plot became very generic and rushed. I ended up not finishing it and deleting it from my phone. The lack of character depth had the cast rushing around after being convinced to change their lives after three minutes of talking.
My suggestion to the writer is to get a large group of beta readers to proof read and provide honest feedback.
Thank you for your time writing this, author. It’s hard to publish a book. You have my respect.