Star Raiders and the Lost Expedition 2nd Edition

    • 3.2 • 10 Ratings

Publisher Description

Two freelance adventurers Mike Tippin and Justin Jobbs, take an unusual mission from a beautiful Princess Tygla Tyger to rescue her brother from the evil humanoid, Lord Drax of the Xatu Empire. But the mission goes awry as Tygla's Brother, Xman, escapes the dreaded battle ship Hades and joins up with the adventurers. Now they must join forces to stop Drax from siphoning the ultimate power.

GENRE
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
RELEASED
2011
August 7
LANGUAGE
EN
English
LENGTH
285
Pages
PUBLISHER
M. Shaunessy
SELLER
Draft2Digital, LLC
SIZE
308.7
KB

Customer Reviews

ttocsmij ,

Sci-fi but needs helps in translation

It is obvious that this is a translation from another language (likely Asian). The phraseology and word selection / punctuation is very rough but -- whether from the reader adjusting or actual improvement -- does improve as the story goes on. The word selection errors persist though. However, the story ends well and that is worth at least 3 stars IMHO. I will be downloading the other Star Raiders if the $ is reasonable.

Tejaswood ,

Horrible editing

Couldn't even get through the first chapter because the syntax was so bad. It felt like is was reading a Chinese manual translated in English.

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