The Billionaire Deal

…..Loved the story and the great friendship between Jack, Chad and Andrew. Kelly was lovely and deserved her HEA! Aunt Mabry was awful but eventually saw the error of her ways.
I couldn’t give 5⭐️ because, even though they were married the sex was too much for me, so I skipped past them.

The writing is ok but the chapter lengths often felt short and ended awkwardly or abruptly. The storyline was a little unbelievable but what can you expect from a billionaire romance. My main dislike was that the characters have zero chemistry. The FMC makes a point to say she’s dated several great guys but just didn’t fall in love because she thinks she’s incapable of it. Then, halfway through the book she’s saying she might be in love with a man she’s barely shared any personal details with. The writer makes lots of general paragraphs about how the two spend their nights together and talk about their days but don’t give the reader many snapshots into the content of those conversations and the emotional connection between the two. I started skimming halfway through because their relationship just didn’t evoke a single ounce of feeling in me. To top it all off, the plot twist was incredibly unbelievable and unnecessary.

I read it completely during a 7 hour tattoo session and I got so into it, I forgot I was being tattooed at times lol. I don’t usually need a lot of romance, but I liked it. I actually cried when Jack rescued Kelly