The Hidden Keeper

I enjoyed the concept. It was different and had a lot of potential. Desperately needed editing. A lot of grammatical errors and wrong words (ie- conscious used instead of conscience) but enjoyed it just the same. Will read the next one in the series.

Ok concept but painful to read

Really poor grammar and punctuation...very distracting...if one is going to write books, one should, at the bare minimum, know when to use "me" or "I".... So simple, actually....
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