The Imp
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وصف الناشر
The Imp waits and watches. But Geraldine Love is too busy rebuilding her tattered life to notice. All either of them wants is to find a someone to care about in this lonely world. But that's easier said than done in this dark novella.
Lost souls struggle to find themselves and each other in difficult times.
مراجعات العملاء
The Imp
Too many characters, chapters did not flow well, loose ends and incomplete thoughts for each character. There was no ending for the computer saga except that the imp was killed...
A good draft
I think the concept of the story was good. I enjoyed reading it. But it was lacking a lot. The characters felt flat almost like they had little to no depth to them. I didn't feel attached at all to any of the characters. The characters needed more personality and history to them. I think the lack of description was also a downside. Most of the story was dialogue; it was good dialogue but I had no idea what the characters really looked like or what their surroundings really looked like. Overall I think this story is a good draft for a more final and deeper story.